Welcome to Day 6 of #RRBC’s October #SpotlightAuthor #PatGarcia @pat_garcia! @RRBC_Org @RRBC_RWISA @Tweets4RWISA #RRBCSA

If you enjoy unique stories of intrigue with a touch of romance, this author’s short story is for you. It is my pleasure to introduce Pat Garcia, musician, songwriter, and author of TURN THE LIGHT ON.

Turn The Light On by [Pat Garcia, 4Wills Publishing]

Pat is passionate about her writing, as is evident from the following essay and an excerpt from her book.


Writing is a craft that must be developed. I am not one of those writers who believes that everyone can write a book.  I don’t think a well-written book falls from Heaven.

If a writer wants their work read, then they must know something about point of view, deep point of view, structure, sentence styling, and how to weave back story into their stories so that it doesn’t seem like they are just dumping words on the reader.

I have many craft books on writing, but I admit that I haven’t read them all the way through.

I choose what I need to read to help me write a specific chapter or even one or two paragraphs.  When I was trying to grasp point of view, I picked up Sol Stein’s books:  How to Grow A Novel and Stein On Writing.  I have other books on the point of view, but Stein does an excellent job helping me.

The structure of a story was another thing that I needed to learn, and the book that I have sitting on my desk always is The Hero’s Journey by Christoph Vogler. I cannot tell you the number of times that I have studied this book until I grasped the essence of what Vogler was saying in a particular chapter. As I began Turn The Light On, I wanted to show Della in her ordinary world. Vogler says, and I quote him here, “If you’re going to show a fish out of his customary element, you first have to show him in that ordinary world to create a vivid contrast with the strange new world he is about to enter.” That is what I wanted to achieve with the opening. I wanted to show Della’s fear, curiosity, and inability to say no to a journey that would forever change her life.

Turn The Light On opens with a Bible Verse that mirrors Della’s dilemma and her fears. Her ordinary world has begun to tumble.

Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil; For you are with me. Psalm 23:4 (NKJV)


Della Cartwright sat in Macey Bergstein’s office in Frankfurt, Germany. She balled her hands into fists, flexing them, waiting for Macey, her boss, to express her opinion about the unexplained money transfers in Della’s private bank account. A plane flew over their building, and Della’s eyes followed its path as she gazed out of the window behind Macey. How she could have gotten involved with a man in a counter-terrorist group was puzzling. Downright despicable. Until now, she had made a name for herself as the Foreign Exchange Settlements department’s queen. Everyone in the department acknowledged her magical abilities. Her intuitiveness and her strong sense of discernment had caught errors and even settled deals, which would have cost dealers their jobs if she had not noticed the mistakes. Yet, she had managed to let a man whose name she didn’t even know wrap her in his web.

Fear engulfed her. What if he was not only a counterterrorist, but also using her to launder money? Her hands shook as she considered the consequences of the mistakes she’d made, and what could happen to her. She didn’t relish standing before a disbelieving judge trying to explain her stupidity.


Pat Garcia can’t remember a day when she didn’t desire to write. At the age of three, Pat wrote her first story. No one could understand it because she hadn’t learned to write. So, she read the scribble on her paper to whoever would listen. Born in Blythe, Georgia, (USA), she is also a musician, singer, and songwriter and has released five CDs.


Would you ever accept a dinner invitation to meet a stranger who never spoke one word to you during your time together? Would you accept that you could not even sit at the same table with them? How about, you don’t even know their name and you continue this “game” for months?

Meet Della Cartwright. A superstar at what she does professionally, but when the tall, mysterious, Italian stranger, Alessio Terracina, enters her world, she begins to question her judgment and everything about her.

In this short story which takes place over the course of one day, this otherwise savvy businesswoman is led into making decisions that could jeopardize her professional life and maybe even cost her her freedom. But the greatest danger…just might be to her fragile heart.

Pat Garcia


Author website – https://patgarciaauthor.com/

Facebook FanPage – https://www.facebook.com/patgarciaauthor

Twitter – @pat_garcia

Thanks for supporting the RAVE REVIEWS BOOK CLUB’S October Spotlight Author! To learn more about this author and all the wonderful perks she is receiving under this spotlight, please visit the RRBC SPOTLIGHT AUTHOR forum.

20 Replies to “Welcome to Day 6 of #RRBC’s October #SpotlightAuthor #PatGarcia @pat_garcia! @RRBC_Org @RRBC_RWISA @Tweets4RWISA #RRBCSA”

    1. Good Evening, Joyce,
      Thank you for dropping by and supporting me on Karen’s blog. I like the title too. I always smile when I read it because I think it creates drama.
      Have a nice weekend.
      Shalom aleichem

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  1. Pat, I agree – just like everyone can’t walk into an operating room and perform open heart surgery, everyone can’t write a good book. Yes, of course, everyone can publish “words” if they so choose, but, merely published words, in my opinion, do not ‘a good book make.’ (I’ve been waiting to use that phrase for a long time.) And good books are the only books that I recognize as books, so there.

    Enjoy your stop today, Pat, and Karen, you know how amazing you are in my eyes!

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    1. Good Evening Annette,
      Thank you so much. You can’t imagine how much I enjoy music. Regardless off whether it is the classics, opera, rock, soul, gospel, spiritual, country, jazz, or rhythm and blues, music is a part of me just as writing is.
      Have a great weekend.
      Shalom aleichem

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  2. Good Evening, Nonnie,
    It is good to hear you say that Nonnie. I get tired of hearing everyone say that anyone can write a book. That’s not true.
    Have a lovely weekend and thank you for dropping by.
    Shalom aleichem

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  3. Good Evening Karen,
    Thank you for your support. You are a writer that I admire and I treasure our work together on THE PIPELINE. It is truly a pleasure to be on the team.
    Have a great weekend.
    Shalom aleichem

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  4. Congratulations on being RRBC’s Spotlight Author, Pat! Turn the Light On was an excellent read for me. I, too, study as I write and I have many reference books. The ones you’ve mentioned sound like something to try. Thanks for hosting Karen.

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  5. HI Karen, thank you for hosting Pat with this excellent post. I agree that like all things in life writing is 10% talent and 90% hard work comprising study, effort and learning. Mind you, if you don’t have the 10% of talent you also won’t necessarily shine.

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  6. Karen, your hosting Pat provides a wonderful vehicle to learn more about writing. It is a learned skill and then learn it again. Pat, thank you for sharing your thoughts on this subject. Take care.

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